Kia Ora Bryce. Nice work on your Weta poem. I am sorry to say that you did not meet the criteria of describing the weta’s life cycle for this task. You did not give information about your Weta's life cycle. You did a great job at describing the part of a food web the weta is on. I liked how you used similes. Next time you could try to put both of the sentences about a weta's legs together. From Arly.
Kia Ora Bryce,So i read the Weta poem, and i was wondering if that was about a big spider? It does sound interesting though. Keep these coming, I like reading them.
Kia Ora Bryce. Nice work on your Weta poem. I am sorry to say that you did not meet the criteria of describing the weta’s life cycle for this task. You did not give information about your Weta's life cycle. You did a great job at describing the part of a food web the weta is on. I liked how you used similes. Next time you could try to put both of the sentences about a weta's legs together. From Arly.
ReplyDeletewhats up Arly,
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DeleteKia Ora Bryce,So i read the Weta poem, and i was wondering if that was about a big spider?
ReplyDeleteIt does sound interesting though. Keep these coming, I like reading them.