Monday 19 June 2017

fidgit spinner


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11 comments:

  1. Unknown21 June 2017 at 04:04

    Well Bryce, so that means we cannot get you one of these fidget spinners for your Birthday then..

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  2. Anonymous26 July 2017 at 14:13

    hi bryce its Daniel here this is really funny bye

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  3. Anonymous26 July 2017 at 14:23

    Hi Bryce, it's Clem, here I like that you described clearly how you don't like fidget spinners, I agree with you. Also this is a good piece of persuasive writing.

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  4. Anonymous1 August 2017 at 13:57

    Hello Bryce,
    This is a really good piece of persuasive writing about fidget spinners are distracting. I agree that fidget spinners are distracting in class and they we shouldn't be allowed them. I have really enjoyed this work.
    From Nathan.

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  5. Anonymous1 August 2017 at 14:02

    Hi Bryce I like your work on fidget spinners. It's cool. I sort of like fidget spinners but I only like them when I'm out of school but I like your work so bye.

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  6. Anonymous1 August 2017 at 14:33

    Hi Bryce
    I really liked the way that you have got lots of information. I also agree that they are very distracting and they are probably are a waist of money. This is a really good piece of writing. I really enjoyed it. From Zac

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